Nailing It Down: What To Include in a Grad School Personal Statement

Sometimes it can be hard to know what to include inboring, stuffy person into their department. Share
a graduate school personal statement. How do youyour enthusiasm for the program and your plans in
know that what you think is important is importantlife by letting your voice shine through.
to the school? What types of details should you put4. Correct Spelling
in and which should you leave out? Let's go over theYour personal statement should include correct
basics of what needs to go into your personalspelling and grammar. If you are applying to graduate
statement.school, you want to sound professional and educated.
1. Specific DetailsYou may still be able to use a little slang and bend
Specific details are essential if you want to create anthe rules of grammar a bit to make your essay
interesting, relevant personal statement. The mostinteresting, but by all means, at least make sure you
boring essays are those that contain only genericget the spelling correct.
information instead of specific details about an event,5. Why Their School and Program
person, or place. My high school English teacher usedIf applicable to the question, make sure that you
to write B.S. (Be Specific) all over our papers if weinclude why you want to go to this specific school
didn't use enough specific details in our writing.and program. You can't assume that they know they
2. Relevant Detailsare your top choice unless you tell them. Explain why
Remember to read the question before you decideit's important for you to be part of their department
what to write about. Sometimes this doesn't happen;and convey your passion for the area of study that
students just write about whatever comes to mindinterests you.
with no regard for the question they were asked.Success
Consider the question throughout your writing, andInclude these five things and your personal
once you finish your essay make sure that you readstatement is sure to be a success. Be sure to let
the question again to make sure you fully answeredobjective outsiders read your essay as well before
it without going off on any tangents.you submit it. They may be able to pick up on
3. Your Voiceconfusing parts or information that isn't pertinent
When you are writing your personal statement,better than you. Give it your best shot, get some
remember to include your voice and personality. Iffeedback, revise, proofread, and send it in to wait
you try to write like Shakespeare, you may comefor your letter of acceptance.
across as boring and stuffy. No one wants to let a