The Stress-Free College Admissions Essay

Your child is about to begin life as a senior in highprocess. Don't critique unless you have found some
school. In my day senior year used to be fun;genuine elements to praise. Always be specific in your
however, nowadays seventeen and eighteen-yearsuggestions; no one can deal with, "This isn't any
olds face a year fraught with stress - both externalgood," or "This is too cliche."
and internal, particularly, that dreaded college- Make the writing process fun and enlightening.
application. In an adolescent's mind not getting into"Wow, your identity is the subject of an essay! Let's
the college of his or her choice is equivalent to beingfind out who you really are!" Help your teen shed
handed a life sentence. Raging hormones and thesome of the anxiety about writing; brainstorm
not-fully-developed prefrontal cortex of the braintogether. You will be amazed what comes to mind
which is the center for making sound, responsibleafter twenty minutes.
decisions create the emotional roll-coaster ride. Help- When you brainstorm with your teen, look for the
take the pressure off. Get involved with the processordinary and concrete. Delight in simple details, images
of writing the college essay. Be patient and activateor concepts to make them sound extraordinary.
your sense of humor. Remember never to laugh outAnyone can shine with an amazing achievement like a
loud or smile too much.Westinghouse science project in molecular biology or
When it comes to the SAT's, practice makesa trip to China; however, to take something
perfect. But how does a teen, who feelscompletely ordinary and lift it to another level is
uncomfortable about writing, tackle the college essaybrilliant. Feel free to use a bit of humor. College
which must capture the distinguishing essence of hisAdmissions likes to be entertained. Keep in mind that
or her life experiences using proper grammar andhumor is subjective; avoid the extreme.
good syntax? Most teens go to school, go to- Guide your teen to use a specific experience or
summer camp and do similar extra-curricular activities.conversation to reveal his or her essential personality
"Help, I'm boring! I never did anything special! I don'ttraits. Let the part stand for the whole. Don't write
know how to write!" And then the door slams.an autobiography or a resume in paragraph form.
Not to worry! I'm not going to tell your teen toKeep the essay focused on one small theme.
exercise daily, breathe deeply, eat balanced meals,- Use concrete words to show, not tell. Using images
drink plenty of water and get some sleep. In myfrom the five senses and a bit of dialogue create a
previous life I used to be an English professor and stilltangible, believable picture. Let the admissions reader
am a college/graduate school admissions essaydraw his own conclusion from what is described.
writing coach. Here are some strategies for writingDon't tell the reader what to think.
that engaging college essay to tip the admission's- Avoid peppering the essay with multi-syllabic SAT
scale in your child's favor and restore some normalcywords. Although this sounds contradictory because
at home. An added benefit: Your teen will feelyour teen is trying to boost SAT vocabulary, that is
confident and even enjoy writing about his or her lifeprimarily for the reading section. When it comes to
experiences.writing, say it simply and to the point. No abstract
- Help your teen set up a schedule for the writinglanguage here like: Interesting, unique, beautiful, etc.
process which includes: Brainstorming, writing the first- The hardest step is to begin writing the
draft, second draft, reading the essay aloud (Hint: Ifintroduction; encourage your teen to begin in the
it doesn't sound right, it isn't), making changes andmiddle (no introduction) and finish the essay with a
proofreading the final draft. Make your teen awareconclusion. Now for the second draft let your teen
from the start that writing means rewriting andtake that conclusion and turn it into a terrific
therefore there will be a few drafts. Allow plenty ofintroduction.
time. In fact, putting the essay away for a few daysHelping your teen with the writing process will
and returning to it with fresh eyes makes you astrengthen your connection. You will learn more about
more objective reader, not too attached to whatthe inner workings of your teen's mind to help
doesn't work. Last minute writing inhibits creativityreinforce his or her confidence. Often we don't really
because creativity needs a relaxed mind which canknow what we are thinking until we write down our
focus.thoughts. We dig deeper when we write to discover
- Show your teen love and respect to bolsterburied treasure. This will set the precedent for future
self-esteem which gets wobbly during the writingwriting assignments.