| College admissions officers consistently rank the | | | | applying to become a member of a pretty special |
| personal essay as one of the most important factors | | | | and exclusive kind of community. One, like any other |
| in their decision to admit or reject students. It's one | | | | community, that seeks to perpetuate its most |
| of the few parts of the application in which an | | | | important values. Present the wrong you to the |
| applicant represents herself or himself not in dry | | | | college or university community and you'll be rejected. |
| statistics, but in her or his own words and ideas. A | | | | Instead, work hard to display essential personal |
| well-written personal essay transforms a student | | | | qualities that are most relevant to the diverse |
| from a package of information into a real person for | | | | missions of the college or university to which you are |
| the committee, whose essential job it is to stand in | | | | applying. Remember that universities and colleges are |
| judgment. No matter how smart and successful a | | | | first and foremost institutions dedicated to the life of |
| student you have been, if you don't write a personal | | | | the mind. Words and ideas are passionately real at |
| essay that quickly and effectively reveals you to be | | | | the university and are deeply integrated into the daily |
| passionate, intellectually curious, and a person of | | | | life of the people who live and work there. So any |
| strong character, you won't be asked to become a | | | | personal experience or ambition that you describe in |
| member of the university community. So, as you | | | | your essay must become fodder for purposeful |
| write your personal essay, consider these tips: | | | | reflection that is of interest and use to university |
| 1. Think about your audience and write for them. | | | | folk. You'll need to explain what your experience or |
| Who are they? What is their task? Under what | | | | ambition should mean to someone committed to an |
| conditions are they reading your essay? College | | | | intellectual approach to life. |
| admissions officers read thousands of essays from | | | | 3. The personal essay is a writing genre, which means |
| hopeful applicants. And they read them over the | | | | that its readers have concrete expectations of what |
| course of a few short weeks, often according to a | | | | should and should not be included in it. Ask those of |
| set of criteria that have not been made public and | | | | your friends who have gotten great packages from |
| that are designed to reduce the pile of applications in | | | | the schools you want to attend to see their personal |
| front of them to manageable size. With a maximum | | | | essays. Write or call the admissions department of |
| of 1000 words and no more than a minute or two to | | | | your target schools to see if they have samples |
| create an impression, you have to make the reader's | | | | available. Use the internet to find successful samples. |
| job easy and interesting and give them reason to | | | | Prof. Allen Grove's website is a reputable place to |
| spend more time reviewing your application. Your | | | | start. He not only provides strong sample essays but |
| writing must be clean, clear, well-organized, and | | | | explanations of how and why they work. |
| easy-to-read. What's more, the content of the essay | | | | Once you've found great samples, study them |
| must be original, compelling, meaningful, and | | | | carefully to learn how to build an essay that makes all |
| distinctive. And, because your readers need to | | | | the right moves, while signaling your originality and |
| assess your analytical and intellectual skills, your | | | | distinctiveness. Remember, even very proficient |
| personal essay must display the rhetorical markers of | | | | professional writers struggle as they learn to write in |
| a highly-skilled thinker and communicator. | | | | a new genre to a new audience. You may need to |
| 2. The personal essay turns you into a real person | | | | try (and fail) several times before you figure out |
| for the admissions committee. The person you | | | | how to write a truly great and authentic personal |
| represent yourself to be in your essay must be | | | | essay, one that will set you apart from the |
| authentically you. But that doesn't mean it should be | | | | thousands of your competitors. |
| your deepest, most intimate, inner-most self. You're | | | | |